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A hundred and seven minutes stood between what Bonnie Tetzlaff said and what the bank's own machine had printed, and Dorothy Mercier had carried that difference around since Friday without once rounding it off. The receipt came off the after-hours machine stamped 11:47 at night. Bonnie's handwriting sat on the line above it.

Saturday morning she spread the whole thing on the dining-room table of the County K farmhouse, under the three-by-four corkboard she'd bought at Fleet Farm for $11.99 and hung where the hall mirror used to be. Fan on. The octopus furnace clanking in the cellar like a man dragging a chain. Five index cards in block capitals, because a claim is all a case ever is.

She called Lu, who never finishes a coffee and never starts a sentence small.

"Brats," Lu said. "Gone by seven. Marv ate two in the parking lot and bought the rest of the raffle tickets off the meat."

"That's the news."

"That's the warm-up." A pause with a kitchen radio behind it. "Who fixed his pills, Dot?"

"Good question."

"And what's in the box?"

"Every week you ask me that."

"Every week you say good question."

"Well." Dot turned the first card toward the window, the way she'd turn it toward a jury. "Exhibit A. Means. The Wagon Wheel's own first-aid kit, and the aspirin bottle Bonnie logged back onto the shelf that Monday."

"Low-dose."

"Low-dose, the $4.79 Deneys' Market sticker still on the base, factory seal still whole. Whatever went into Orv's organizer that last Sunday night came out of a bottle that had already left the building."

Lu was quiet a second. "So not the kit."

"Not the kit." Dot underlined the sticker price with her thumbnail.

"Then the window."

"Exhibit B," Dot said. "Four names could have walked through that door between the Friday lock-up and the Monday open-up. One man hasn't worked a Monday in twenty-two years, and the posted schedule says so in black. One man was in the recliner where the ambulance found him. One man was in Green Bay with a time stamp on him."

"And the fourth?"

"The hand that kept the supply log."

"Prize penmanship?"

"Prize penmanship. The book's been kept straight since 2001."

"Arithmetic."

"Exhibit D," Dot said. "The refill came from Boulanger's the Tuesday after Labor Day with thirty in it. It holds twenty-three. Seven gone in one Sunday fill, and the organizer was holding aspirin when they carried him out."

Lu made a low sound. "And the binder."

"Exhibit E. Twenty years of Friday register tapes on one side, the Sunday deposits over to the bank in Sturgeon Bay on the other. The tapes run about two hundred dollars heavier every week."

"Over twenty years, that's what?"

"Past two hundred thousand, by my arithmetic."

"Sweet suffering cats."

Dot pinned one more card under the rest, blank except for three letters across the top. "WHO. Nothing underneath. Not yet."

"Dot."

"I heard you." Lu waited. "Say it out loud, then."

"She deposits on Sundays. That machine stamps the minute the envelope drops."

The line stayed quiet a moment, radio and all. "You going to say that to her face?"

"Sunday. I've got a page for her to sign."

Dot pulled the county folder out from under the exhibit cards — six pages, in a hand she knew from the Legion's thank-you notes, back when the man who wrote it was a new deputy with no gray in it. She had read it four times this month. It had a phrase for the man and no name for him. A man from the boat show. Every sighting in those six pages was somebody reporting what somebody else had heard about her mother, and not one witness in the whole file had ever laid eyes on the man himself. A town can agree on a story for thirty-six years. That doesn't make it a document. It makes it a habit.

Saturday night she drove the twelve miles north, because a timeline is a claim and a claim needs a look at the scene.

She stopped at the Kwik Trip on 57 for gas and a glazer, on the theory that a woman buying doughnuts at eleven at night is nobody at all.

"Pump four?" the kid at the register said.

"Pump four."

"Glazers came out of the oven at ten. Still warm."

"One, then." She peeled the quarters loose from the cup holder and stacked them on the rubber mat.

"$1.09."

"Quarters all right?"

"Quarters are all right."

She paid and ate it in the truck with the radio off.

The bank lot in Sturgeon Bay was empty at a quarter to midnight. No teller's car, no county cruiser, no second set of headlights down the row. The canopy light over the after-hours deposit machine was out — dark bulb, dark iron arm over dark concrete — and the only light at the slot was the machine's own screen, a small square burning blue-white where the envelope goes in. A north wind came off the bay and went through her barn coat at the seams. From the road, a person standing at that machine would have been a shape. Nobody could have sworn to the face.

Dot wrote it on the back of the Kwik Trip receipt with the dome light on: Light over deposit slot — out. Then she put the receipt in her coat pocket with the rest and told no one.

Sunday afternoon, Bonnie's kitchen smelled like a casserole and an oven left on too long, which is why Dot's folding fan came out of her purse in October without apology. Geraniums in coffee cans on the sill, four of them, marker-labelled on the cans: Red, Red, Pink, Red. Pie already cut under a dish towel, two plates out before anybody knocked.

"You don't knock," Bonnie said. "Not at this house."

"The door was closed."

"It's Sunday. That's the whole invitation." She was already pouring. "Coffee."

"Half a cup."

"You always say half a cup. You always drink all of it."

"Did you sleep?"

"Some."

"You sleep like a stone or you don't sleep at all. There's no some."

Dot took the last page of the inventory out of her bag and laid it down with a pen. "I need your initials here and here. It attests you've seen the contents as listed."

Bonnie read the whole page first, the way she reads everything, and signed with a pen from a cup of pens, and capped it, and put it back the way she found it.

Then Dot said it the way you'd say the weather. "Went past the bank Friday. Somebody finally got that canopy light fixed over the deposit machine."

Bonnie set a slice of pie in front of her and slid it across. "No, still out."

"Huh."

"Has been all fall."

Dot kept her hand moving — fan, plate, fork — because the woman across the table had just told her the condition of a bulb over a machine twelve miles away, in the dark, in October, and had told her without stopping to think, the way you correct your own family about your own street.

"The oven's been on an hour," Bonnie said. "You're going to cook."

"I've got the Kermiss pie table anyway."

"You're coming."

"I'm coming."

Bonnie nodded at the oven like it had agreed with her. "Good. They put me on slices, because I cut them even."

"Even slices."

"Even slices."

She sent Dot home with two pieces wrapped in wax paper and a marker note on the foil — Belgian pie, Sunday — because that is how Bonnie has labelled everything in that kitchen for twenty years.

Dot drove south out of town on County K with the heat on her ankles, and half a mile short of her own driveway she pulled onto the shoulder and sat in the dark with the engine off.

Then she took a fresh card out of the glove box, uncapped the pen with her teeth, and wrote one name at the top of it in block capitals, the way she had opened every file she ever closed.

BONNIE TETZLAFF.

The card explained the whole thing. What it obliged her to do was a different case, and she had not opened that one yet.

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